She carries around her shadow like a
lost breath.
Her arms are tucked behind
her neck and her teeth grow backwards.
If you ask her nurse where she is,
he will say, “Nowhere,” and read his paper with a yawn
floating over his head, while a woman, this woman
without a name, without a fingerprint, wears a
new face every time she knocks on your door,
curving lips and twisting arms
for food.


gripping…
Excellent writing, Millie. Enjoyed! M.A.
Happy you enjoyed!
Fascinating images in this poem! The illustration is quite intriguing too.
Thank you, Kat! The poem was inspired by the atom-like focal point of the photograph.
Very fine poem. The first line alone is better than many of the published poems I’ve read today.
That’s quite the compliment, Thomas. Thank you for dropping by!
brilliant as always..good to be back and see your fine work!
Grazie tanto, Michael!
grazie a lei!
Hi Millie, you write beautifully, and I love this mysterious poem!
Hi again! Just to let you know, I have nominated you for the Inspiring Blog Award. For more information, please click on my blog at: http://mypenandme.wordpress.com/2012/06/07/inspiring-blog-award/
If you choose to accept this award, please copy and paste the award icon onto your blog, tell us 7 things about yourself and share with us, some of the blogs that you like. Best regards, -M.A.
Good morning M.A! Unfortunately, I am not accepting awards at the moment, but thank you for the humbling nomination. :)
That’s okay, Millie. I’m still very happy to be able to offer my readers a link to your blog. :-)
Millie, P and the Mouse are impressed!
I’m glad you both like it! :D
For whatever reason, I haven’t been getting any sort of notification when you post something new. Seems like I’ve been missing out.
Thanks for the comment, James. Good to have you back!
This is awesome! I can not wait to spend more time on your blog!
I’ll say the same of your blog! Welcome aboard.
Oooh, creepy stuff! Love it. :D
Thanks, Eve!
Your poetry is always amazing, this is no exception!
Reblogged this on Written Spaces and commented:
Love the imagery created…